as death removes us from clock world.... i cannot even imagine how it will be without being tied to time any more... it must be wonderful
Well, no one knows what's out there really. Could be worse that hear, or just the void of not being anything. >KB
this is a mindbender colin...i am not quite sure what to make of it....it feels as if seperating to stand apart...i like the bringing back together in the last couple stanzas...
Ambitious stuff Colin but you carry it off - your last four lines really nail it for me...
really strong close, Colin, and I also favor this line: Think of here as bent from time. ~
This has such a sense of transformation about it.
The dot fusing forever - reminded me of John Donne, perhaps also because of the clock analogy.
A strong poem!